Instead of just spouting how hawt this is like everyone else I'm actually going to say something critically and hopefully helpful.
The arm on the left look broken, maybe it's the pose. The hands are a little too small and so is her chin. The area between her breasts and the creases under her breasts are a little off, I would assume the mesh is see through.
You'd do well to try to make your figures a little more anatomically correct, but hey man keep working at it and you'll just keep getting better. Good luck